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nightbeest77
PostPosted: Tue Nov 16, 2004 2:47 pm  Reply with quote

Well why does that matter? I mostly write inspiriational poetry, but some people want to find other random meanings too, so just take a stab, and if it's any condolence, you probably wont ever see us in real life anyway!
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Sky
PostPosted: Tue Nov 16, 2004 3:07 pm  Reply with quote

ok here i go... e-hem
(word of warning...its shit)

in the yellow moonlight
i see your face
the brightness through the dull
i feel your breath
i sense your fear
and through the knife
i free your soul
i calm myself
i watch you fall
i see your eyes - not bright
no more
hot blood on my hands
it washes my sins
but does not cleanse my mind
maybe next time...??


i just wrote what came out, i didnt really think about it, its a bit wierd...
ok, im gunna post it
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thoth87
PostPosted: Tue Nov 16, 2004 3:09 pm  Reply with quote

wanna kill someone eh?

that wasn't bad at all, especially for improv. Feel good! Rejoyce!
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Sky
PostPosted: Tue Nov 16, 2004 3:20 pm  Reply with quote

hmm, sometimes i feel like killing someone.... i often do in my dreams.... i killed someone last night, ill write it in me dreamy bit!!!

it dint really make me feel better though lol, but im glad you didnt think it was shit!!!
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The Renagade Blue
PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 6:39 pm  Reply with quote

well i certainly hope you dont kill me!

and not shit at all
i quite enjoyed that
slightly homicidal, and excellent because of it
keep up the great work!
i like %100 or it so far!

(and yes... i am back)
~DAn

:tips hat:
:flips up collar:
:walks off into darkness:
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Sky
PostPosted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 1:20 pm  Reply with quote

welcome back!!!!
im also glad you dont think its shit!!!!
not really written much since, but i had a scary dream again last night!!!
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